this is just me but people who cnc (comment and criticize if you dont know what it means) replaymakers that literally just started like that^ are conditioning his style from very early on. the above posts consist mostly of "dont twitch dont do weird movements dont do out of the norm stuff". the replaymaker will follow the tips that you gave him (which are incredibly general and not situational) because he just began making replays and is looking to improve, and will end up with a very generic and vulgar style. if he continues doing what he enjoys instead of what the "average replay" looks like he will eventually improve his unorthodox style and end up something super unique.

the only tips i would dare give at the point would be very vague stuff (i was never one that thought there was any truly "perfect" cnc because replays are like art), like for more rotation try to first move your whole body to one side (extend left pec, rotate chest left and contract right pec for example) and then reverse it all (contract left pec, rotate chest right and extend right pec). things like that are good for understanding how joints work together. relaxing joints you are not using is also often useful for getting a bit more speed and momentum behind your movements.

i think the replay is nice for a start. definitely some acrobatic stuff before the dms. also, that skeet impressed me for your experience, very nice. keep having fun with the game, dont try to focus too much developing your style... that necessity will come naturally. it angers me a bit how conditioned the evolution of replaymakers is in toribash due to the cnc which is almost always the same nowadays.