Was alright

Try animating your intro to make it a little more dynamic and stuffs

Cc was alright, though a little dark (I know how it feels, it happened to me once too)

Freecam could have been done better, it's really important when you're doing Toribash videos

Are you recording at 60fps? If you aren't, do it. If you are, try using something like Twixtor to slow things down instead of velocity.

A little bit of motion blur would be nice

Sync could have been done a little better

The last bit at the end could have been tracked better, maybe try doing it frame by frame manually if it isn't working out properly