I'd be happy to let Snake and the Bushido team help with this guide if it's going public. After all they are the best when it comes to fair aikido.

I can get/make the replays required just tell me what to do

But so far these tips don't seem to be sending the best message. We don't want to raise a new generation of shovelers and wrist-contractors. Work on your tips, provide replays to better send your message on what you actually mean. It's all fine and well to say stuff but you need evidence to back up claims.