Originally Posted by
Kradel
You call him a disgrace? You can't even write a grammatically correct sentence.
Other than your bad bars, what disgusts the most is your presence.
You realize just you being here attracts bad thoughts.
Worse than the thoughts Nazi's attracted during the Holocaust.
You attract innocence that thinks to like you.
Hold up, I said that backwards.
You like to think that innocence attracts you.
It doesn't in fact, it hates you like it hates complaints coming from fat dudes.
Fix your problems, were not talking math but change too,to,two.
Just like them, your too lazy to do anything about your problems.
Complain constantly and hope Jesus comes down and solves them.
You say you won't fuck people like other guys do?
But you will get fucked by other guys the way gay guys do.
Wordplay isn't my strong point but it's great to use.
'Cause idiots like you don't understand a word I produce.
Slow down, hold it back. Take your religious bar again.
Then you can can start to feel, every Christians revenge.
Now, sit down, please. I would like to present.
Me, the best rapper here, a gifted decent.
Yeah, wordplay is very fun when used correctly :3 I highly suggest it. Here is a good example of an amazing wordplay:
Since you act like the big guy in a dinosaur film.
You can share the same fate of those who 'die-in-a-saw' film.
do you think grammer decides wether you can rap the only thing that comees out your mouth is crap boasting about how your a producer so am i so its nothing i aint used ta..
you can bearly use a pen so how can you win? ill break your fuckin legs until your bones poke through your skin
you thinking of defeating me? ill take you on doctor phill and beat your ass legally
and i aint afraid that you might beat me im afraid that this fat shit might eat me
you must be atleast 20 acting 14 id rather read a cinderella story half the shit that comes out tour mouth is boring you got the whole crowd snoring.....
Your a bitch youve been torn to bits it must be a gift for someone to be this shit...
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i eat your mom like dinner
anyone see the shit i gotta deal with from these beginners
they gonna use degrading words like callin me a nigga
you cant keep up this speed cause im a world class killer
saying that my rap style is crooked. i beat you in a fight and i keep replaying the footage
i dont even pull the fuckin trigger anymore cause its just a waste of bullets
so i think its time for these haters to get off my dick got my own city you can call it luketropolis sayin you got confidence when you just have the opposite but i dont need to state the obvious ive heard better from polititions tryna keep the city positive..
Last edited by lukeypow; Jun 14, 2014 at 04:46 PM.
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