I actually don't like the way it progressed and got faster/louder. I would have preferred you stayed with the sound and feeling the beginning and end gave. Those parts sounded like someone grieving playing a sad song. I'm only good at piano improvisation, then writing down what I played. If you wrote this yourself beforehand it's quite good actually.

ya, just didn't like that middle part I understand the kind of feeling you were going for but from a musical standpoint it just wasn't as appealing to me as if it would have stayed with the same sound throughout