i like the metallic feel the bass synth has, and the harsh hihat/whatever percussion element that was panned slightly to the left helped that. the only problem i had with the intro was that it seemed a bit repetitive after a whole bar

it gets really good with the piano melody though. the part after the intro does a nice job showing the style of the track but i am not sure i like the notes played with the pad. before that it had a nice harsh feel but i think the harmony the pad used works a lot better with the piano melody, not so much on its own

i like the piano melody, i think because the first half of it (A C E A x2 A C E F x2) gives it a feeling of sadness. that feeling of sadness however you turned into a feeling of mystery(-ish(?)) on the second half of the melody, and i liked it a lot. however, i would have enjoyed if the last part of it had a bit more drama to it. instead of it being A C E B x2, A C E G# x2, i would like to know what |A C E B x2, A C E G#, A C E A| sounds like, or A C E B x2, A C E C2, A C E G#

i like it so far