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Because I should be going to bed right now, I'll watch them all but CnC three.

Something: Really cool opener but I think you had a poor recovery. Next time, try and get in a better position after the hit, and then take the pose immediately from there. It'll help you to look smoother in the end.

Z-Murpose: Strange opener, but it wasn't bad. I'd avoid the legs ghosting as much as they did. Nice quick decap, but again, the recovery wasn't as nice as it could have been. I do however, like how you got to standing quickly. The skeet adds a nice touch to the replay, but it was sloppy in the way that you fell over. Maybe you could edit it to get a better skeet?

Manipulation11: Just going to say (because it looks like you haven't been doing this), if you save the replay with the same name, it saves over the original version. That way, you won't have like, 15 versions of the same replay at different points (providing this is what you did). Anyway, strange backhand to get him up, I wasn't a fan of that. I prefer kicks and punches in manips. At about 270 you were on the right track with spinning him, but you lost your grip on him. Avoid grabbing Uke (I saw that). I think you should have kept going a bit before you kicked. This is decent for a first manipulation but it was kind of sloppy (try and have only your hands and feet touch Uke). Hold your neck.

Well done :]
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