your ideas and concepts aren't bad

the execution is where you lack, but don't let that stop you. i'm entirely okay with you bombarding us with concepts and ideas because, with practice, you'll eventually figure something out. once you do, you'll put plenty of video makers who choose to stick with the norm to shame.

i personally liked scene 0:07 to 0:10, but it did feel a little stiff and stale too me, the the scenery was pretty great

i do like the use of backgrounds even though they don't really fit, atmosphere mods would be your best bet considering tori's live in a world of blocks and spheres.

genuinely excited to see what you do