Originally Posted by MissFate

ok before i say anything let me verify myself. i am a praticed music critic i judge raps all the time even make a few of them myself. BUT i am not contracted as you are.

please tell me this isnt your legit stuff because im going to be completely honest with you, its bad. like the first one says 'shoot it out' for and until 45 seconds thats like 1/3 of the whole song not cutting out the 12 seconds of just beat. Im going to assume that the record dealer made some 'changes' to your original version and this was the outcome. also your flow compared to the beat is off. back in the day rap used to be about life stories, tragedies, or memorable moments. now a days all people rap about are the people they've killed, bitches they fucked and how many, drugs they smoke. really all that tells people is: Im a stone cold killer and I would kill my own best friend if i had to, I have the uncontrollable urge to fuck as many women as humanly possible no matter who it hurts the pain i put them through and why, and Im a drug addict who probably needs rehab has the money for it but still does it because it is Quote on Quote 'Cool'. listen to the song Dead and Gone that is real rap it tells you you never know what real is until it hits you right in the face.


also is that car yours what happened