Some friendly criticism for Bercat, Embry, and Miss.
Bercat....
"I'll call you fender bender, cuz you are a big mishap." normal metaphor cliche
"You have the same mentality as a faggot in a jeep." you'll have to explain this one to me because Jeep is a good brand except for the fact that most of their models look the same.
Ohhhhh i see you just needed something to rhyme with this :/ "Like the grim reaper, I leave bodies in a heap."
"Call me sandman mothafucka, I'll put your dopey ass to sleep." Lol this made me laugh
Miss...
As soon as i saw this "Young Egg" i knew this was coming "BATTLE ME NOW SO I CAN SET YOUR ABORTION."
First time ive ever herd or seen this word used in any rap of any kind "So you better skedaddle,"
Embry...
"I mention Bercat so much cuz I notice him as a brother." Awww ;-; but ive only every seen you mention him three times in three raps ever the third time you were rapping against him.
"What I see there is no bigger than Genesee River Cod." really you have to be from this area to even get this metaphor
"Hype the hell out yourself do you think you're a fucking god?"
I asked her. her responce Quote for Quote was : (._.) (l: ) (.-.) ( :l) (._.) they see me rollin they hatin'