The kick around 900 felt a little bit sloppy and after the drop that follows it your arm jerks a bit bringing you back up.
As for the sweep, it's a
great idea to do it, since it's rare to see and looks pretty good.
Overall I'd only speed it up a bit. Maybe try contracting the right glute at 695 to make the leg's trajectory more direct, or using some left hip and glute around 670.
Other than constructive criticism, my god the amplitude of the touchdown raiz, swingthru and following cork...
I would pay to see you and Flash have a tricking battle, speaking of which check that other thread here in ORMO.
Edit: Just saw your sig ahah wasn't expecting that but I still think it's true.
Also check this
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread...246539&page=26
Last edited by Oblivion; Nov 12, 2014 at 12:40 AM.