Guys i am starting to upload videos to my YouTube channel.

No i am not advertising I am asking for constructive criticism.

Is this good for a start? What else should I do? Do you guys have any ideas for me?

Please be honest.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuUSxHMupPc

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYef4...ewL5i0OChliZbg
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if i posted this in the wrong place please move it.