Originally Posted by
Astral
Man, just fun by editing... this is absolutely not my creation, 1) I don't like the opener, I would start differently this is completely not my shit 2) we haven't got the same level, I mean, this is like compare Cod at Battlefield/ Lamborghini at Ducati 1199 Panigal. We don't have the same criteria. and 3) I just worked on it because you said the previous one wasn't clean : p
Damn, i didn't know we were on such different levels in regards to SP's lol I appreciate you saying i am on a Lamborghini level thankyou man j.k.
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Ok Astral and any other good SP person, this I think is pretty good. I think my flow is there and all that other jazz, Astral feel free to edit and show me what you would do please, and anyone else if you have suggestions. I think im getting better at Sp's.
Last edited by Murcinary; Dec 24, 2014 at 07:55 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump