Dude, put briefly, You're wasting my time now. You're not interested in getting in then I won't bother getting you up to our standards. Your comprehension on what is stylish and ours might be different if you judge it from other points of view than we. Now please, quit the thread, and think about the fact that "stylish moves" "strong hits" and "well placed hits" (giving you dms and fracs, for example), ain't the same. I think you're confusing style with some other things. But deciding whether you want to learn more about it all is your choice, and please don't do it in this thread as it was done for definitely some other purpose.
Now as I said in other places, I have no intention of teaching random people.
Read: As you're not in, you're not even applying, then I'm not interested in fixing you up to our vision on the world etcs. or working on you in anyway. As I already said, what you showed "ain't quite what I wanted". Now please, pursue your goals on some other grounds than "RA-land".

P.S. "just checking" your options to get into other clans?
Dude it's hard not to draw conclusions that you're looking for a way to escape from there, what doesn't make you so "ok leader" actually.
What other reasons should you "check out in which clan your membership application would be accepted" for? I mean ponder on how does this look like, you and anybody from your clan who look here, as I don't need your answers for myself. Now dude, let's finish this. I'm bored with you ;p. Go;)