Nice stuff, classic style but, in your lines (and dots).
Only thing to cc there are a BIG one,
If you draw RL draw on GOOD paper and use GOOD ink!!
Do as you like but stop puting your own effort down by drawing on thin lined (sht) paper. Clean sheets from any printer are better! A 5usd worth of papers are mandatory for a 100hour efort!
Sry the caps lock n all, but this is important for you going afther your talents.
(sry my speling my native are norwegian 8P)