They're alright, though I would need to hear the flow.

Also maybe instead of rapping about what you don't have maybe you should try rapping about your needs.

And as a fellow rapper there is a time when you should be direct and a time to beat around the bush, use imagery, it makes it more relatable and visual instead of trying to directly speak to the people, it doesn't catch on too well, You gotta start thinking from outside the box instead of trying to break out of it rapping about those whack kids spitting shit about status, money bitches and material goods, sure whatever, but again you gotta use imagery to be a true MC that could lyrically stand as well as conceptually stand.

Try different techniques, having studied and tried some out myself. Really broadens horizons in the technicality of writing, I simplicity is your thing go ahead, but you'll get blown out of the water, Being a one trick pony is not cool nor is it fun.

5/10 for at least trying and getting a point across, but too many reuse of words.
The second is okay, the figurative part where your tongue is a machete hacking thoughts apart literally flew over your head.

Also RAWWRH
Freeman and policeman Is an internal rhyme as free and police have the sound of "EE" looks lazy but this ain't no nursery rhyme.