Originally Posted by LucidSpore

quicksplit:
The opener was okeee. Not too generic, which is good.
The next section was done pretty well, but I feel like you could have accomplished the same feat with less grab, gaining more style points (personal preference) and power possibly.
That brings me to the hit. Again, pretty standard split. I feel like you may be able to get a bigger hit with some editing, though.

your thread seems spammy, watch out for the GM police