Thanks everyone I've decided to draw this again when I get the chance again to see if I could put your advice to work. But I can't get the original photo atm because I was visiting my mom's house and the picture is framed and just drew it from there. Hopefully I can get the time to do this again.

I wanted to change it up a bit from just doing animals... but humans are just harder to draw.. for example;

http://imgur.com/ONYQCxU