Sorry, I do think the video was decent but nothing really stands out from this video that I can really comment on

I don't mean to sound harsh but I'm just pointing out things that you can try to improve on :P

I guess my favourite part of the video would be 0:38 to 0:42, the sync was more or less there and the subtle glow effect fit well

Nothing against you personally, nor anyone else. I think it's cool that you're trying new things what with the intro

Really, I'd rate this video something about 6-7 out of 10. It's nothing special but it's far from being bad