Ehhh, I'm not really sure about this

I have no problem about the shaders, the shaders would actually have fitted the whole upbeat music thingy quite well imo

However

The CC is kinda crap, no offence or anything.

Intro/outro does not fit Toribash as you're editing it at all, animating some simple shapes would have been far more effective and interesting.

I'm not sure why you decided to change up the style of editing for the final replay, if you wanted to give the video some variety you could have at least made a few of the earlier edits somewhat similar. Right now it just looks like you're trying to get some variety but you're not really getting anywhere with it

I think it would look better if you showed a fraction of each spar rather than the entire length, this way it would actually look like you're giving a sneak peak of what's to come instead of just giving it away; it kinda ruins the suspense. Promotional videos are supposed to make people excited to see the final product(s), rather than give them an entire thingy to watch

You went overboard with the sound effects. Yes, they can add to the video if done well. However, it doesn't really fit in well with this kind of song, plus you more or less spammed the sounds everywhere. I mean yeah it's a personal preference but it kind of overpowers the video if you know what I mean, I spent more time focusing on the sounds than the actual clips/song because any time you sped the video up all I could hear was wind

The sound effects at 1:15-1:18 get a little better for a while because I can actually distinguish between them