SO I TOOK YOUR GUYS' TIPS AND USED THEM.
- Velocity
- Reduce pancrop
- Don't overedit
- Choose a good song


Anyways, I am really proud of this for a second attempt.
Thank you all for the tips for the last one, this didn't take TOO long, but I am kind of new, so I wouldn't be making anything that would take long.
PROGRAM - SONY VEGAS PRO 13 *EDIT*
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