I thought this was good, definitely one of the best edits I've seen in the last few weeks. I think the bloodset could still work, but like DatSkip said already, a mask around it so only a small part of the tori is bloody at any time would look better.

I think the sync was really good for the most part, and I like the CC quite a lot (although I'm still a complete beginner when it comes to CC). The camerawork was my favourite part - I personally really like it when the camera is up as close as it can be while still being able to see everything.

I also think you use screenpumps very well - one of the only videos I've seen recently which has used them without them becoming distracting.

Transitions were well-attempted, although they're really quite easy when the majority of the background is solid black.

Overall good work, I look forward to seeing more from you : ) I hope the next one is slightly longer, but this is just a matter of preference