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Thread: Real's replays
Originally Posted by NICOLAS135 View Post
-Flashy Generation
I'm not really good at parkour so i can't CnC it but the grab looks orrible and a lot of things r not usefull.
-Bringing my image to the void
I guess nice opener but than u grab the body before a dismemberment and this doesn't look cool,the kick is nice the punch too but ur arms r one into the other so maybe u can fix it,the headkick is quite nice but maybe looks better if u didn't hit it with the shin but the foot. The pose is quite nice but i think u can do something better.
-Time slip
The opener is nice but can be better if u didn't relaxed ur wrist but hold it and the kick in the ground doesn't looks cool( it will stop ur momentum of the spin). Than u grab before the kick but nvm i can accept it this time u did a first nice kick and a lovely second kick for the split and a nice smash into the ground for the head but u lost ur wrist :/. And u need to work on the poses, they r not boring.
I'll give u a 7/10

There was no way i could keep the wrist though anyway yeaaahhh since you dont know parkour ill say this nice and slowly, grabbing in parkour is only then if you fail hardly and you need balance. so there you have it
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