i will do this but being mature about this is really hard

the whole nature of this music video and it's presentation doesn't in any way seem mature.
your panning is really, really, really bad. there is no rhyme or rhythm to it, you just make keyframes look however you want and the program just decides to try to make the path that you've created-- which is random positions it seems.

you also didn't even film half of this video, you should probably credit the original owners of everything that isn't you standing in front of that dude acting like an ass.