Originally Posted by Larfen

Pretty cool and smooth in a lot of places.

I really liked the split before the dms started as well

A few errors (hue hue hue):
I didn't like how your right arm held all in the opener. It would be pretty cool if it was held there for a shorter period, but it was there a bit too long for my taste.
I'm not a fan of the second punch (the one that breaks the chest). It seems like it wasn't planned too far in advance, like you only really started paying attention to it once the first dm was basically done. Its good to set up followup hits well before the preceding hits (if possible). Thinking about your followup provides smoother replays overall.
Head bruise
A bit of weird stepping around getting into the pose

pretty cool though bruh