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you dont follow up the left arm movement in the opener so it looks kind of meh
i like the spin, but afterwards you sword of slow down and there's too much of a gap inbetween you landing and starting to spin again

second spin is good but the kick tap on uke looks underwhelming compared to the spin you make before, might be because of how your foot goes behind ukes wrist so the kick sort of "slides" off

looks like you struggle to continue after the kick and decide to go for a split, which in itself looks ok but is a bit of a lackluster compared to your movement in the beginning

the grab onto uke is ok i guess, but i do not like how your whole leg gets bruised because of it
decap is pretty neat with the backslap

ending is cool where you do the smooth spineroo and final kick
also shoulder + elbow movement at 395 to 347 looks very off im sure you can see that yourself so i dont need to explain why
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