Thanks for everybody (off and on this thread) that has put in an opinion and some actual constructive criticism and thanks tyzi for yours since it's a little bit on the straightforward-no-goodideas page. Would be nice to get some actual ways to improve besides pretty much saying "it sucks" in a long paragraph lol (besides the repeat of replay).

Went ahead and tried to fix what tyzi said for what I could. Some of the color corrections changed. Replay no longer repeats it skips in slow-mo with the beat, fixed the sound.
Thanks much tyzi