well, it takes you a while to get fast
the two litle kicks you do, while important, dont look that good
the hand thing is a grea idea in my mind, altough not that good executed
for example, you could have used it to get most of the dms in the first boom, and the skeet seems a little lazy.
fix the tranition to the pose, it looks like you wanted to do 3 different poses

otherwise, the replay is good.