the opener is interesting, i kinda like but the dms are eh:/
the first one looks like a little tap (you could say its ok cuz it looks similiar to the second but eh :/ )
the 2nd dm is nice
3rd dm isnt too great, i think 3 or 4 dms are possible there.
the knee-kick is cool (how much time did you spend to avoid breaking your own knee?)
the last dms are eh :/ ít was unexpected (which is normally good) but i'd prefered another kick or maybe something different.
the transition into the pose is neat.

keep it up :3