Looks intresting. It's to cartoonish atm, can u add some shading and other skin tone? Something grey'ish.
Try a bit of shading on hands only and i tell you to continue or not.i want these to be permanent on my tori.
If u get to the cuts part try to make a version with cuts and scales and one w/o cuts and bruise and stuff.
Just add some shadeing for the moment and other skin tone. Dl and lp me to see my head. I will also post pic of my other head. must look good on both and must go with any head