Originally Posted by
ChemicalE
That poem was art.
My eyes turn red.
My feet feel funny.
I have no feet.
Cri.
That was so deep. I could really feel the essence of life in that poem.
I also loved the imagery of the feet and how you used that as a metaphor for what you can feel yet is not really there.
I like how this describes the inner pain as well, very nice job.