1) it is noticeable there was and effort of sync but it could have been chaged/done better for example if you decide to continue at 47 when he makes that noise add a screen pump or an effect of some sort.

2) ik its been said but make it more interesting like move the camera around you only ever stay in the same area looking at the same side of the tori... try moving around and getting better shots.

3) also at 43 the other tori gets in front of the camera and you can see through it. it makes that part of the vid look messy :/ and for a couple seconds i was just distracted by that and i found myself not watching the vid so please fix that if you continue

4) your keyframes got to be bad at times were the camera would jerk around and seemed sloppy

thats really all so nothing major