a opener foi meio rígida,apesar disso o giro ficou bom.
o chute que tu deu e o uke subiu ficou bom.
mas eu acho que o chute no torax poderia ter sido mais forte e causado mais dismembramentos,apesar disso ficou bom.
acho que você poderia ter editado um pouco mais e fazer o balance/ending sem cair.
o replay ficou muito bom,gostei desse realismo nos moves.

the opener was a bit rigid/stiff.but the spin was cool.
the kick you did that moved uke to air was cool.
but i guess when you kicked the uke's chest you had edit more times to do more dismembers.but it keeps cool
i guess you can edit more times it at make the ending without falling.
but the replay is really good,i really liked that realist style on movements