I liked the opener and dm's in zpitch. You got a little sloppy towards the end however. gj.

Try using an even more heavier grav like sambo. I noticed you're still kind of floaty in the lighter grav's. I know your just getting into replay making, but I think it might help.

When you get floaty your movement becomes a little more sporadic, indecisive and funky.

Keep at it!