Originally Posted by TyZi

cool hair, awful face.

the mouth looks so out of place. it's like it could be on the same head with a different facial expression. ^_^ only looks ok in text, should look a bit happier

there's a large portion of blank space inbetween the eyes and the mouth, maybe fill it with some type of shadows or nose?

Originally Posted by WeooWeoo

Nice colors. Try to get rid of the sharp edges that are transitioning from gray to baby blue. Try blurring it, or smudging it so it blends.