the repeats/jumpcuts:

the jumpcuts were fine imo

the repeats at 0:22-0:24 were a bit different from the rest of them, since these didn't actually end with whatever came next in the replay. its like you combined a jumpcut with the last repeat. makes me think that there might've been more to that replay.

the repeats overall are awful imo. i mean yeah, the song repeats itself, but that doesnt mean you have to do it every time it has those repeating sessions. like you didn't do the jumpcuts in the beginning repeatedly did you? those were more tolerable because they werent done over and over in the video.

instead of repeating the clip over and over again when the song starts repeating itself, do the speed up and slow down thing like skypepro said. just not too much to where it's annoying.

or maybe you can sync some of the hits with the repeats. that'd be smoother.

you dont have to do it on every repeated word. maybe wait a word, then do whatever effect you want to do, wait a word, etc

also: at 1:13 those repeats looked better than all the rest. just pointing that out

the overlays:

i think the overlays for the most part were fine. the overlay at 1:01-1:26 is questionable however

the glow around the toris didn't really fit in yeah?

other effects

the toris lose quality when they start lighting up at 0:41-0:58

dont you think you couldve just left the replay at normal speed, (0:56), since it is short anyways?

the thing at 1:20 was cool. maybe when that effect is over, perhaps shake the tori left to right a bit to have the illusion that they united back?

in all honesty, you should really focus on the replays themselves, without ruining their flow. if the majority of the video is trying to show how cool the effects are instead of how cool the replays are then what's the point?

this song is rather hard to work with, so good luck.

i'd suggest starting from scratch tho buddy :c