well if u want...
The starter was generic and suddenly u just changed everything and did that weird kick that got the decap. You had some good dms but you do need to work on your style. Try going from one move to the other smoothly and dont relax much, sometimes its better to me mostly holded. Dont contract or extend randomly make fluid transitions.
You got one boomhit, it was nice. Try getting more speed when u dm so it looks better.