Font: I'd prefer something a little more fluid... like, each letter flows to the next in some way.
Colours: Nearly perfect. I'd want to see it either a bit lighter with the grey or a bit darker with the black.
Toris: I really like the idea, actually. I'd like to see them with a titch more passive poses, though. I mean, we're spectators after all c ; You shouldn't be afraid to do anything asymmetrical with the toris, either. Like... If the two had different poses, that could look alright.
Last edited by pouffy; Dec 13, 2015 at 06:28 PM.