I actually really like your control over gradients and highlighting/shading/whatever you're doing with blending colours. It looks really smooth and I quite like it.

However...

As it is, what you're doing looks really foreboding. The really dark and imposing lettering adds to this a ton, but the toris' poses have a huge effect on this as well. Honestly, I've never seen this clan as a very frightening one c ; I'd much prefer a bit more of a fluid, gentler font and adjusting the colour scheme just a bit to match (although, I'm not sure if this needs to be done. As always, at your discretion).

What might bother me the most is how ready-and-rearing-to-go the toris look. We're spectators, you know? I'd like to see much more passive poses and such. I do like what you did with matching poses from banner to banner if they were talking about similar things. I'd keep that in further wips. Also, I'll bring up again that symmetry isn't always that great. I'd love to see a little bit of difference between the two toris on each banner.

I also noticed that the colors on the toris are super imposing as well. Is it possible to add a little bit more standard grey to your palate, as far as the toris go?

So...

Less imposing/terrifying font
Passive poses
Different poses for the two toris on each banner (not necessarily for all of them)
Change "In Spec We Trust" to "A World Yet to Be Seen"

It might do you good to bring something else to the table as far as creative flair. I love the idea of the toris and I think it could look absolutely fantastic, but I wonder if you could make even just the logo pop a little bit more with detail.


Whaaaat!? I'm no slave driver; I expect you to accept fair compensation for your work >. >

(assuming we use it :/ )