Originally Posted by
Zwift
alright, sorry for not listening to your recommendations.. there was just so many I didn't know which ones to follow :cc. I will follow these though, thanks for clearing the parts that need work on up. I will try to use as you stated a more fluid font, I have a couple in mind. I will also use the space behind the text as an advantage for the flames.
Sorry about that, I'm having a rough week and was overly harsh. Truth be told, you're doing awesome work. I have absolutely nooooo idea why K0HTA is making all of us throw our opinions on the thread instead of work it out amongst ourselves and have a spokesperson, since it's obviously very confusing for the artists... He said something along the lines of, "We're paying them to run in circles."
*Sigh*
Anywho, nice work and I'm looking forward to what you'll come up with next.
Gangsta:
Hmm.... This does look cool, but that's not... us, you know? These things in particular seem out of place:
The metallic sheen
The splatters
The "cut" lettering
The full coloured outline of the lettering - I like the idea of using touches of colour to emphasize the lettering, but bordering it completely seems like a bit much.
Those circles... I don't think circles like that are the way to do it, but I think you could make something similar work.