I'm getting used to using after effects. I still have lots to learn and I'm still very new to editing (only started about a month ago), but I'm posting here again because I think I've improved since the first edit I posted here.

Please tell me what I need to improve on and give me a few tips if you can



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-Glimpsed (Radioactive guy)
-Pimp (Guy who is not Radioactive guy)

After Effects

I have no idea what happened at 0:15, maybe I did something wrong or maybe it was just rendering fuckery