The song was bad, yes I know its your video and you want to use your taste in music, but you have to keep the opinion of the public in mind as well. You're making this video for them to view, not just for yourself. Find a good midway point between what you like and what they like.

I think you did a really good job at syncing the beat of the song with the actual action in the video though (hits, DMs, Movement, etc).

Besides that I would say don't be so afraid to mess with the speed of the replays more. There were some moments when the Toris were just moving to slow for the pace of the video/song. Like during some of the parkour replays when they didn't have much speed while starting up their runs again.