a lot was going on in that replay. I would suggest trying to keep your head from bobbing unless its flowing with your movement. Try to move with more clarity, it was hard to identify what you was trying to do with your movement even though there is nothing wrong with random and spontaneous movement if it looks smooth. Your dm's weren't bad, your first two kick particularly. Try to highlight them with clear and decisive hits instead of just bashing uke like you did towards the end of your replay.

There is a lot of improvement, and a lot of potential takes time and practice. nice job