When I wrote the first chapter of 13 Stones I wanted it to be similar the the way the the book Son of Neptune is written. Using multiple single person perspectives. This was written over a few years ago so I am not surprised that the language, grammar, and usage isn't on par. I do plan on continuing it in this fashion. Thank you for the feed back. . In fact looking at it now I can see that it has a lot of work that needs to be done to it. I'll Hopefully be able to get around to that by the end of the week.

Update: Im currently working on the first chapter of the Wanted Series so expect that soon.