Definitely better, still too thick though. A thick black line makes it look more like it was carved with a hacksaw instead of being cracked by blunt force, so you gotta be a bit more subtle than that, oddly enough (in other words, THINNER LINE). Remember that cracks don't actually remove any material, they just split it apart, like freshly broken rocks that you can put together near-seamlessly. I'm sure we've all tried that. :v