Originally Posted by
Shook
Definitely better, still too thick though. A thick black line makes it look more like it was carved with a hacksaw instead of being cracked by blunt force, so you gotta be a bit more subtle than that, oddly enough (in other words, THINNER LINE). Remember that cracks don't actually remove any material, they just split it apart, like freshly broken rocks that you can put together near-seamlessly. I'm sure we've all tried that. :v
^^^ good thinking, this never occurred to me about the removing material thing.
so i made a new crack and i think its a tad bit thinner, its hard to work that this size because of the amount of pixels. new version below so uh tell me what you think.