Originally Posted by
RayWill135
cool wip
you should try adding more engaged distance. For me, it looks better and you wont be right in front of uke, you could be more creative in how you get to uke
hip dm is okay, make it look more powerful
kick is the best part of it for now, there might be something special coming 
try to boom it :P
don't really like this replay all to much, might come back to it some time later. cant really follow it up with anything.
I will make a replay with a longer engage distance.
thank you all for the support and constant posts. tyty