Editing sets the whole mood, not the replays. You have no CC, awful velocity per usual, and your camera work isn't great to showcase replays (see: camera leaving the tori at :30)


Take a look at this, and look how soft everything is. It matches the quiet sound of the ambiance and the voice. The camerawork is almost still with very slow movements if there is any at all. No awful text popping up showing the actors during the scenes.

The whole "epic trailer" kind of deal is all you ever do, and for some reason it is never good. Try something else.