Originally Posted by Mack

It has it's moments. The run looks pretty bad considering you're not moving your pecs in sync with your legs like most people would do. The cartwheel ish thing looked ok but the setup for it was very forced. Try to use your whole body to achieve movements. The b-twist was actually pretty nice but it was ruined by the way you contracted your knees in the middle of the twist, resulting in a pretty forced and unstylish trick. Your corks need some work overall. Try to bring up our leg instead of having it go directly to the side during the swingthru and try to not keep your hips and knees fully contracted. You should also try to bring up your arms and rising leg in sync aswell as have your pecs follow the movement of your spin to gain that extra momentum. You straighten the pecs out in mid air later. Last thing I see during your first swingthru is that your knee is too bended. If you're gonna bend your knee, try to just give it a little hint of a bend to avoid having it mess up the sync between your rising leg and planted one to have it all finish off at the same time to get a nice launch off your feet.

There's definetly potential here but you're gonna need to spend more time on your moves if you're gonna evolve.