that seems great,diuway,but make "complete" images/art,it can look good.
actual cnc: need more details,the shadow on neck seems strange,and the middle face seems awkward/out-of-place: just look that chin and his mouth...just low it a bit and will look better,.
that nose point look strange..made me lol.
the hair seems ok,but that place without much hair...fix it plz

also,can i edit that image? i wanna paint/remake it(dont worry,ill put credits of drawing to you)